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Thursday, February 27, 2020

Poems by William Shakespeare (me)

Hola taco boys, for literacy I made a poem but we had to base it on a poem written by William Carlos Williams and we had to change certain lines. My finished outcome is this...
I have hurt 
The children
That were 
in my house
And which 
you where
Probably
Inviting for 
lunch
Forgive me 
They where
Devilish
So evil

And so fiery

The red is the words i changed but the original poem is...

I have eaten
the plums
that were in
icebox

and which you
were probably
saving for
breakfast

Forgive me
they were
delicious
so sweet
and so cold

I enjoyed doing this and had lots of fun.

 Alright adios burrito bros
P.S. If any teachers see this rico copied me
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1 comment:

  1. AnonymousMarch 3, 2020 at 1:52 PM

    Hi, this is a very interesting poem. I liked the part were it said the children devilish because it reminds me of my sister, who is also devilish. Why did you decide to do that topic? Hopefully next time Rico won't copy you.

    Kind regards, Riley.G

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